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Responsdilldall: Ny oppdatering; Dikt - Be a man

InnleggSkrevet: 11 Okt 2009 14:00
Twiggy Watcliff
Joeh. Moren min jobber på krisesenter, og det skal ha jubileum snart, yay. Der skal jeg synge. Så jeg skrev da en sang. Teksten er her:

ONE MISSED CALL

You’ve got a friend called Catherine
She lives a few blocks away
From the house you’re living in
Catherine has a boyfriend
He’s prince Charming number one
Unlike yours, who comes home
And asks if the football match already has begun

In the summertime Cathy covers up
You have never seen her before
In a shorts, a skirt or a top
She never wears bikini
Not a day without make-up on her face
You think it’s weird
But it’s probably just a phase

How can you let her stand on her own?
You call her when she’s home
But she never answers the phone
While he is yelling and screaming
He bangs her head against the wall
Dear Catherine
You have one missed call

It’s twelve pm and you’re out having tea
You talk about your husband;
How lazy is it possible to be?
You say he’s a pain in the neck
Catherine nods and replies
But when she does
You can see a twinge of grief in her eyes

How can you let her stand on her own…

One night Cathy comes over
And asks if she can stay
You finally get the point
When you notice the bruises on display
She’s crying “I think we got into a fight
I always had the feeling
That something wasn’t right”

You know it’s not the first time they fought
Catherine’s old boyfriend
Wasn’t as charming as you thought
Your own man might be lazy
But he doesn’t bang your head against the wall
Dear Catherine
Your phone is broken
No more one missed call

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 11 Okt 2009 14:30
Ashley Yates
Aaaw, Twiggy, den var pen :")

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 12 Okt 2009 09:32
Janey I Johnson
Oi, den var peeen! Rørande! Du er veldig flink

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 14 Okt 2009 11:46
Twiggy Watcliff
Tusen takk, begge to. ^^ Jeg skal spille den i morgen.

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 14 Okt 2009 12:21
Janey I Johnson
Lykke til, det går superbra! ;)

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 23 Okt 2009 23:51
MAP
Herregud, det var jo kjempebra. Du er flink.
Men bare en liten ting; twelve pm, out having tea? Burde det ikke vært am? O.o

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 24 Okt 2009 15:09
Twiggy Watcliff
"Am" er midt på natten, Marie. ^^ Tro meg, jeg googlet den der. Tusen takk.
Marion: Tusen takk! Jeg skal prøve å få spilt den inn. Om ikke det er mulig har jeg planer om å ta en tur på leiren neste år, og da skal jeg prøve å få med gitaren min. <3

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 24 Okt 2009 17:16
MAP
Åh, nå som jeg tenker meg om, så har du sikkert rett. ^^"

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 07 Nov 2009 18:23
Twiggy Watcliff
Tusen takk, Marion. Det var ei jente i klassen min. Hun heter Karoline. xD

Re: One missed call

InnleggSkrevet: 16 Nov 2009 21:39
Marth Akamatsu
Jeg elsker sangen, og jeg elsker stemmen din. :D
Sånn, hvis jeg sammenligner deg med ei i klassen, som er ganske flink til å synge egentlig. Men på fremføringer blir hun nervøs og syngers stille og skjuler nervøsiteten bak en masse overdreven... hva heter det, vibrato? Men du synger med klar stemme og med masse selvtillit.
Enig; gjør noe med talentet ditt.